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CE: Snowy Wonder by Lazarian96

Hi again... It is I, darkhour616. And you are entering a piece to the contest... Cool! Plus, you need some criticism to your entry... W...

Lightning and Prizima by Lazarian96

Lighting and Prizima... I like the name for both of them. I can tell these characters are Sonic-influenced, so they can fit into the un...

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CE: Snowy Wonder by Lazarian96
Hi again... It is I, darkhour616. And you are entering a piece to the contest... Cool! Plus, you need some criticism to your entry... Well, I always will be honest with you within my muster. So, here's goes...
First of all, bravo with your major improvement! You did say that you have better equipment and it shows... You have better pen strokes on this piece. Not to mention, your background has more depth. A solid colour background is okay, but not with a contest entry. I love the ribbon effect to the sky...very cool. And the mountain layout is basic, but effective. :) The snow from the sky (or stars, I don't know...correct me when you reply back) brings it life. The snow is deadly! Great detail and depth onto the ground. As for Angelina, great light and shadow on her. Her snow power is stellar! Your magical feat with its lighting and colour...really good. So, those were the pros...now the cons...

I wish you had the ribbon effect flowing a lot more... I love it...but I believe you can bring it a lot more extravagance to this. I recommend you experiment with curves and let it flow. Also, I would have done it in a different perceptive, maybe a 'cat's eye view'.... In other words, if you want the judges to be blown away, try to come from different angles... so your piece summon the most impact from them. Other than that, really good piece. If you don't have time to revise it and do the angle thing. Don't worry about it... I believe you can pull this off. Just follow my advice on future projects and try out some things... You can do it! But you have your own vision and I don't want to get in the way of that. Just kick more butt and take names... Okay? I wish you luck and take care. Godspeed, my colleague....
Violent Ankh
This is an ankh, if it is used for a weapon. Sharpened and ready to take on anybody that doesn't fear death. LOL
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Wolf Hunted: Commission by darkhour616
Wolf Hunted: Commission
This is my first time using GiMP with this picture. I was going to use markers, but I don't have the money... So...I decided to use a different medium. Critiques are welcomed. I want to be somewhat decent will this... Lol.
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Quentin Hernandez:TraumaChaser by darkhour616
Quentin Hernandez:TraumaChaser
I did this yesterday, because I want people to see what I have doing for so many years. This piece is what I call "Tramua Torment", because it is hard for Quentin to fathom all those tramuas into power. For him, it is like getting hit in the gut, and the pain travels from his stomach to his mind. It is hard enough to handle one tramua, but many is an accomplishment. Not to mention, it is the curse that he has...(tell you about it later). So he has to deal with it...one way or an another. By the way, I use diffent colours, in order to some different voices. And I use Paper-Mate(c) gel pen, in order to show depth to Quentin. And one correction...I tried to spell "apathy" but I forgot to spell it, so sorry... Other then that, this is one of my creations that I am very proud of. And if you all have any questions...feel free to ask. I will be honest as I can. More to come... Enjoy!

(c) Lonzie Jackson
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I am sorry for not being on Deviant Art. My extreme delay was my bad. I have being so much but done so little. I feel like I have fail as an artist and as a person. But that is about to alter... At this moment, I am in school, and I am trying to make it. But I have a few...(and I will say it loosely) objects that I have to take care of. I am at on my last limb and I can't take an another direction. This is...(like the title) all or nothing. I need funds to designate myself to SCAD in Atlanta and I need help. I am looking for work(including...yes my artistic brethren, a part-time job). But I have no choice... So, if you all need art to be done and I need commissions for the projects, I am your person. Just be specific and I will work with you. Hopefully, we will both be content and keep in contact for future projects. Hell, if I do a spectacular job, recommend me to your friends. Plus, we'll do some collaborations...I like collaborations. So, let me know... But now, I am here to kick ass and chew bubble gum...and I can't afford any bubble gum. Ha ha.

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Lonzie Jackson
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Current Residence: Albany, GA
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Favourite genre of music: Heavy music(prefereably dark)
Favourite photographer: Damian Maurer
Favourite style of art: Manga
Operating System: Windows 10
MP3 player of choice: I-pod
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Favourite cartoon character: Zim
Personal Quote: "Be water, my friend." -Bruce Lee
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Tuntalm Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much for watching :nod:
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darkhour616 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016  Student Artist
No problem! :D
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Lazarian96 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for showing your interest in :iconthe-wisp-ologists: by watching us!

Don't be afraid to join if you ever feel like it! :)
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xXDoctorMythXx Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
hey, thank you for watching ;3
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3wyl Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
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darkhour616 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2016  Student Artist
Thank you very much....
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3wyl Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Let me know if you have any questions, suggestions, concerns or anything else! :D
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darkhour616 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2016  Student Artist
Will do! And thanks again...
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Silvernia Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014   General Artist
Thanks for the watch.  You are most kind! ^_^
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Dann-Rei Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
:iconsayhiplz: Thanks for the WATCH~!!!!
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